A Christmas in Bath by Cheryl Bolen
The
Brides of Bath, Book 6
Length: 20,000 words (about 75 pages)
Heat level: sweet
All the characters from the first five Brides of Bath books will be serving up some Christmas cheer, while Glee Blankenship sharpens Cupid's arrow.
Unbeknownst to scholarly Jonathan Blankenship, his sister-in-law Glee has decided this Christmas he needs a little push to make him see that his dear friend of four years, Miss Arbuckle, will make his perfect mate.
Length: 20,000 words (about 75 pages)
Heat level: sweet
All the characters from the first five Brides of Bath books will be serving up some Christmas cheer, while Glee Blankenship sharpens Cupid's arrow.
Unbeknownst to scholarly Jonathan Blankenship, his sister-in-law Glee has decided this Christmas he needs a little push to make him see that his dear friend of four years, Miss Arbuckle, will make his perfect mate.
Published & Release Date: Source
Books, January 6, 2015
Time
and setting: Regency England
Genre:
Historical Romance
Heat
Level: Sweet
Reviewer rating: 3 Gold Crowns
Reviewed by Vikki
Warning! May contain spoilers.
I really wanted to read this book and expected to
love it. I've read the Brides of Bath series and loved all of the books in it,
so when I saw this one, I pre-ordered the book. I looked forward to seeing what
had happened in the character's life. Unfortunately, other than Glee, I did not
get a view of their lives. Ms. Bolen touches on them and mentions children
briefly, but that is all.
At 50% in, I was ready to set the book aside. I do
not like doing that, so I went to check out the reviews to see what other
readers had to say about this book. To my astonishment, it had almost all
5***** star reviews, and at that point, I would have struggled to give the book
2** stars. I decided that it must have a sterling second have and continued on
with the story. As I continued to read,
it did get better, but not by much.
The book begins with a scene where Glee Blankenship
is telling Miss Arbuckle that her brother is coming to visit for the Christmas
season. She presents her plan to Miss Arbuckle to bring them together. Between
Glee and her lady's maid, they give Mary a make-over. It turns out that Mary
does have one outstanding attribute, a very generous bosom. Glee believes that
if Jonathan sees Mary transformed and other men vying for her attention, he
will be jealous and come up to scratch.
When Appleton, a notorious rake shows Mary favor,
Jonathan is concerned to say the least, but he has to be practically hit of the
head (figuratively speaking anyway) before it dawns on him that Mary would make
the perfect wife for him. After all, Mary is his “dear friend”, now that his
best male friend has married and never has any time to spend hours having philosophical
discussions.
This is my problem with the story. The conflict
between this pair is that Jonathan wants to remain a confirmed bachelor all his
life. The reason for this is very weak to say the least, and not very
interesting. Nothing has ever happened to turn him off to marriage, no traumatic
childhood, and no woman who turned away from his advances, nothing of that
nature. The only reason I could discover is his desire to be left alone to his
intellectual pursuits, and he feels a wife would be a distraction. In essence,
he is an intellectual prig, and an extremely uninspiring hero.
Mary on the other hand, believes she will remain an
old maid, since she is so shy and unassuming on top of being plain. She has been
friends with Jonathan for years and he has never shown any signs of an amorous attraction
to her at all. He only sees her as an intellectual equal. She is his “dear
friend”. That theme is present
throughout the book.
Now for the mechanics of the book, I found the
dialogue stiff and the constant use of Miss Arbuckle did this, did that, said
this, said that grating on my nerves. The author also used Jonathan's name over
and over again. Miss Arbuckle has supposedly known several of the ladies from
the series for years, having gone to a girl's school together, yet Glee and
Mary address each other as Miss Arbuckle and Mrs. Blankenship. If they have
known each other all that time, I am confident that even if they were that
formal in front of servants, they would have used each other's given names when
they were speaking privately. I found this constant use of proper names very
distracting to say the least.
Of course, if the personalities of the hero and
heroine had been fascinating, I may not have noticed this issue, but this is
the most boring couple I've ever read about. Firstly, they are both, the only
way to say this—they are nerds in the first order. He is a true beta male in
the extreme, and she is a bluestocking, plain and way too prime and proper. I
have read other books with a beta male and quite enjoyed them. Mary Balogh does
an outstanding job writing them. I also have enjoyed books where the heroine is
a bluestocking and loved them. I think the problem with this pair is that there
is absolutely no chemistry between Mary and Jonathan! There is no sexual
tension at all in this story. Personally, one of the two needed something in
their past to draw me in and get me vested in their story. That never happened.
I really wanted to like this story, but
unfortunately I did not. This is only my opinion, others have enjoyed the book.
It does have a decent “happily ever after”. I will leave up to you. If you
decide to read it, I hope you enjoy it and are entertained. After all, that is
why I read, and I am confident that is why you read as well. Happy reading!
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